Revised+Songs

This is where you will post the revised editions of your songs. After seeing many of them, and having a few people come up and ask for suggestions from both me and Ms. Martinez, I think I can boil down what I think is the best advice (at least from my perspective): please don't make your song sound as if you spent five minutes on Sparknotes looking for major plot points and symbols and then finding some way to shoehorn all of them into a song. I promise that Ms. Martinez will realize. Put in some more effort, and try to go deeper than just the hackneyed buzzwords. If I have to read the word "soma" in a song one more time, I'm probably going to hang myself. I admit that I'm guilty of both of these crimes to a certain degree as well, and am trying to rewrite a new song by this Friday in an effort to rectify that. However, I'm very happy with what I saw today, in terms of initiative and most of you actually wanting to rewrite your songs. I wish all of you luck with those revisions, and I look forward to seeing them. __Final songs__ Blame It On The Alcohol

Lose Yourself

Bad Romance Baby Welcome to the World State Fresh Prince Free Falling Empire state of mind Forget you Billie Jean Cold as ice
 * just need and ending song

REMEMBER: FINAL DRAFTS OF THESE SONGS ARE DUE BY FRIDAY (5/20)

Billie Jean & Fresh Prince- Jillian Pailin



Cold As Ice - Pete Wikoff

Baby - Sarah Moskat

Empire State of Mind - Caitlin Chapla

Mad World & E.T. - Jazz Teich

Welcome to the 60's - Samantha Bradley

Free Fallin'- Jake Matthews Forget You - Travis O'Connor

"Brave New World" - Ben Mills